Narrative writing- Camp

We are going to camp for 3 days and 2 nights. Our teacher told us to write a narrative. This is my narrative...


“THE FOOD WAS DISGUSTING!!” there was this random group coming out of the cafeteria. My group went inside and we could smell.. NOODLES!! SUSHI! And Mashed potatoes!! OMG!! MY FAVE FOOD!! (except the sushi).

I took like everything! (except the sushi..) I took the mashed potatoes and it smelled like the kind granny used to make!! :) i took a bite into it and… OMG THIS FOOD TASTES JUST LIKE…. MY COOKING!! EWWWW!! (yeah my cooking is really bad..). Oh well, the noodles might taste nice. It smells good, it looks good, and it tastes LIKE.. LIKE.. WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBE HOW DISGUSTING IT IS!! DON'T THE COOKS IN THE CAMP KNOW HOW TO MAKE NOODLES? Noodles should always taste good!

After my whole group was totally disgusted by the food we went to the gym.. Yay… (not). GOSH! I couldn't even run! No.. i couldn't even WALK! My stomach was crying!! CRYING FOR FOOD!! I overheard a group talking about the camp food. My group went to see what they were saying and guess what?? We found out that the camp food is mixed with the LEFTOVERS from the last group that came here last year!! I was just like “yeah right! Do you have proof?? AYEE??” someone handed me the pictures they took and guess what! There was a box full with food, it had a big label that said leftovers on it! The cooks were pouring the leftovers and mixing it with the fresh food! OMG! THIS IS SO DISTURBING!! This random guy called toby or something like that said “ i am so going to go and send letters to my mum and dad asking them for food!” no one wanted to do that we all wanted to show the pictures to the teachers!

“WHAT! I DON'T BELIEVE THIS!! IS THIS PHOTOSHOP OR SOMETHING!?” Mrs Paniora didn't believe us “Kids! I'm going to go to the cooking room to see if this is true! I will be right back!” we wanted to come too! “Can we come? Please?” mrs paniora let us come with her.

We saw a big door that said ‘cooking in progress please do not enter’ But mrs p ignored that and came right in. we followed her. And guess what we saw?? NO LEFT OVER BOX! “Timmy, can you explain all this?” mrs p was furious!!!  “Umm mrs p…. The left over box WAS true! But.. when my brother came here last year he saw the leftover box and he saw the whole thing! He even took pictures.. But i think he told the teachers and the teachers had a talk with the cooks.. I found these pictures in his room…” timmy was inocente.

But i was still confused.. “But why does the food taste disgusting?” a cook heard us and he came over and said “We TRIED to get rid of the leftovers but.. WE HAD SO MUCH FOOD LEFT! So we just dumped it into the plates.. Nothing goes to waste here!”

We were all speechless.. “You know what kids? Go have your shared lunch. If it runs out then i can just sneak into the teacher's cabin and get some food”

We all were so relieved! No more disgusting mashed potatoes! Or NOODLES!

The rest of the day was great! Even though my group had to do toilet duty… But we still got to talk!

My little sister is going to camp after 2 years i wonder how it's like then? :D or she might not go because the teachers sued the camp people for serving leftovers from 1989?? Oh well, who cares? I am just glad i am going home and i can get back to sitting on the couch watching tv and eating junk food!